Reviews for The Bartender Was Joking |
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a chapter 10 . 1/7/2008 When exactly do you think you will be updating this? Because I'm dying for more! |
Twinkle Star Bell chapter 10 . 1/2/2008 very good. update soon |
violet-eyez chapter 10 . 12/26/2007 so what's his reason for getting married |
AlexSays chapter 10 . 12/24/2007 I'm so happy you updated! I'm also glad that Lorelei is finally starting to give John a chance. I'm so excited for the rest and I hope you have a happy holidays! |
a chapter 9 . 12/20/2007 update soon, please! |
violet-eyez chapter 9 . 12/17/2007 what's his reason 4 marrying her? |
philipa1234 chapter 9 . 11/24/2007 cool twist |
Unsociably Acceptable chapter 9 . 11/24/2007 HA ANOTHER PERSON THAT SAYS HAPPY TURKEY DAY! FINALLY! happy belated turkey day to you too! yeah, i'd be really happy if you kept with this length. no qualms at all. xD |
AlexSays chapter 9 . 11/24/2007 Yay, so happy you updated! This was such an amazing chapter! I still feel so bad for Lorelei and I can't believe that she's pregnant! I'm wondering where you're going to be going with this story, if you're going to make them end up together, or actually divorce in two years! Anyways, please update soon |
cherry617 chapter 9 . 11/24/2007 i love it |
Twinkle Star Bell chapter 9 . 11/23/2007 Quite good. I think that the reactions are very realistic and that the characters are really real. They're not exactly popping out of the pages though. Try and make them more like someone you would meet on the street. Their reactions are pretty real though. I really liked it and was amazed at the fast update. I think this is an original plot and I can't wait for the next chapter. Also work on characterizing John more. I know we haven't seen much of him but he seems kind of flat to me but that's probably because we need to get to know him better. |
The Latest Plague chapter 8 . 11/20/2007 omg... this story is so good... i was crying the first few chapters, i swear! so sad... |
Sing.it.like.you.mean.it chapter 8 . 11/20/2007 Oer, I like it. Keep writing! ps. hm, I was going to ask why John decided to get married to a drunk woman he didn't even know, but hopefully you're going to tell us about that later... :D |
cherry617 chapter 8 . 11/20/2007 I love the story, but the chapters are short. |
Unsociably Acceptable chapter 8 . 11/20/2007 aw that sucks. didn't they give you anesthetics or what ever? i like that, its cool, though i've never had my wisdom teeth pulled out yet..yay new chappie! |