Powerful details, with a hint of horror in it. The imagery felt like I was watching a good movie. Keep up the good work.

-C.N

The monster is a little more than horrific. *shivers* I hate ignorance. Some people don't think it's that bad, and maybe it isn't...but I just hate it. Another wonderful poem.

Wonderful metaphors, and beautiful phrasing. Nice.

This poem was interesting to read. I like the language you used, along with the descriptions.

You have really powerful detail in this; I loved the imagery throughout, it was almost like walking through a fantasy novel. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.