Reviews for Be lie ve
HIme1221 chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
I've felt the same way b4...nice!
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
Another way to see the word believe. The ending slapped me in the face. A bit harsh, but true. Good job! Keep writing!

Daiysis chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Definitely a powerful message here. The last line is what really opened up my eyes... "Smile at me and lie." Another wonderful piece _
Ashelin chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
I hate people who lie to me. They don't do any good in the end. Great haiku. And thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it.

a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
For some reason, I rather like the ending. Not sure why... Anyway, nice haiku.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
Powerful emotions in this, I really enjoyed the read through - I loved how you interpreted 'believe' very unique. Keep up the good work.

Much love,