Reviews for Water Poems
A Nonny Mouse chapter 3 . 11/17/2007
I will say that this was a nice contrast to your first two poems, which I thought were quite weak. Their rhymes were very forced; this one had passable flow and rhythm.
Captain Lucky chapter 2 . 11/1/2007
It gave me shivers and made me want to snuggle up next to the fire or something. It seemed very innocent, especially the title 'Water in the sky.' I love your work!

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CL
Captain Lucky chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
This is really powerful. It sounds a lot like a Psalm. You have such a gift with words. Lucky!

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CL
Needa S chapter 2 . 9/17/2007
Awesome write! Keep'em coming.
Needa S chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
Very nice. Well written as well. Keep up the great work. God Bless.
Azrael Adamine Gaunt chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Very, very well written. Great use of figures of speech, and it had a good rythmic flow to it!