I loved the story but I had to stop since I can not handle how weak Max is... no fight what so ever. Shes portrayed as a weak women, i cant stand it. arggg so frustrating lol .P

why is she so OKAY with the situation wtf

it's actually nice and i hope you complete it and make it more spooky and romantic

Good

I read the boled thig and its rilly good its actually one of the best books ive read and thats saying alot sence im 13 and I read all the please countinue with the books its rilly good.:) thanks for your time reading my rew and have a nice day.3

Wow! This was really good, you should really update!

Love

Alright, I got through two chapters, and I just can't do it. Maybe the plot makes up for it for others, but not for me personally. "Kool"? "goodie 2 shoes"? Seriously? It's a good plot idea, I like it a lot, and I wish I could continue reading but the careless errors are just too much for me. Perhaps if you redid it, I would give it another chance. However, keep up with the excellent plots, and I hope to read something of yours in the future.

Good story! However, I did see some mechanical errors (like missing commas) and spelling errors. Still, I really lked it. You have potential!

The plot and characters are pretty good. The plot is interesting and attention keeping. The writing its self isnt great but is still pretty good. As the author has stated this is written for fun so the writing is fine because the plot makes up for it.

I am anticipating the next installment. I hope it is written quickly. :)

Oh my gosh

This is a great story

I cant wait for the next chapter :)

Yay, Leo! I like Leo! I think he's my favorite.

nice cliffhanger. please update soon. your story is great and suspenseful.

Ok, but you can def. inprove. I hope Jayce is in the bloody room...alive.

Write more soon

Spirit

Oh my god! What? Update soon!