Reviews for I HATE My Brother's Best Friend! Right? |
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![]() ![]() read this story back on quizilla... loved it and still do. its been like 5 years since it came out but its still good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE this story! You have GOT to update, even though you're apparently not updating your stories anymore, which SUCKS! Anyways, UPDATE! -K |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is absolutely awesome! I love it! -K |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome... I already hate Aiden! Stupid pervert! Anyways, the only thing that bothers me is that the story is in second person... otherwise it's great! |
![]() ![]() ok, I officially loved your stories when you were on quizilla and I didn't know til today that you were on fictionpress! So now I guess I'll have to read the version of IHMBBFR that's on here! You're writings awesome, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! It's just as good the more you read it. On quizilla it was definately good, and here for some reason it almost seemes better? Strange, huh? I'm glad you moved to fiction press, and although the second person thing is different from how most people normally write, it's still enjoyable. A new twist that keeps you entertained. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHA! UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like you story so far. I do get really confused with the whole 2nd person thing. Other than that I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() shello introductions are always the worst to write, right? i was just thinking that you shouldn't lump them all together, because, its much funner (great grammer i have!) learning about them through little quirks they have, or by little bits at a time, like... you get what i mean? ahah but i love the story ] ] keep going! x bubble |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! omg i am lovin your story so much i can't wait to see wat happens after Aiden and Nina kissed omg i have to read more. do me one favor thou? hmm.. update soon asap! i mean soon soon lol i'll be waiting p.s. addin it to my favs your doing so good so far with ur writing love it.:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! I read this story on quizilla and loved it dearly. I can't wait to reread it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've already read the whole story on the other site, so now I just have to wait for...well, I'm not gonna spoil it for everyone else. |
![]() ![]() ![]() heyy well i congratulate you for writing in second person... although it makes it quite strange to read sometimes, specially if people are used to first and third person. i usually think second person works best in one-shots and the such, because i just think it gets a little annoying reading 2nd person.. but thats just me! yay! its pretty cliche.. i love cliche ] i think that maybe you're a little bit brief with your descriptions, but overall i think its a good start! good work! x bubble |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't mean to be rude or anything, but out of curiousity... why exactly do you say YOU instead of her name? otherwise, seems like its gg somewhere... |