|Reviews for Scared of the Future|
| Qalbu chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
This is my favourite too! It's really good. It makes perfect sense! good job.
| Mac13eth chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
:) I think this might be my favorite poem of yours. It brings a smile to my face and reminds me of a certain someone...
The repition that slowly degrades makes me think of riding a raft toward a waterfall: steady at first then quickening to a splash.
| gnomesbeatfaeries chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
So wonderful! Exactly, I think, what goes through many people's minds. I don't know if you're going for sleeping with someone, but the poem really reminds me of how much of a big step it is. What really pulled me into that frame of mind is the "but striking that match, starting a spark Isn't quite lighting the fire And I don't want to lose myself For nothing but desire." But my favorite lines were the last two. Keep up the good work,