Reviews for Being A Girl
gnomesbeatfaeries chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
I really like how this poem portrays a strong, independant, modern women who still can't get out of a relationship that isn't really going anywhere because of LOVE. The only thing I would work on is punctuation; sometimes its really needed to slow things down. While no one will jump on you for not properly punctuating in poetry, sometimes a period is needed more to signal to a reader to take a little break, because poetry often is very rhythmic to a reader. Also, I don't really get the last two lines. Does the person leave the other? Or is that what they SHOULD say?

michelle