Reviews for Like Ranclouds
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
Great poem.

Twilight Starr
felicia13 chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
'Like Rainclouds' is a perfect title for this. It sounds like rain clouds and feels like right before it rains, when the humidity lifts and the clouds open.

Amazing opening line.

I'd like to have seen more of the beginning. The end sort of seemed to meander off in another direction and I liked where the first half was going...

Felicia.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
Quite nice. Lovely imagery and word choice. It starts out seeming cliché, but the ending gives it originality. Good work.