Reviews for I Think I've Made It
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
The ending makes me want to cheer :)

Keep writing!
NekoKaji chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
I'm so glad... So very glad :]

-insert enormous glomp/hug here-
Not Afraid of Bruises chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
good. some solid writing. here's some advice,hope its useful.

1. show, don't tell

2. pity parties only on special occations

3. vary stentence structure and word choice

4. always read your words out loud

5. a poem only pauses if there is a comma, period, etc (don't forget them, even if you are doing slam poetry)

6. details and images are very important (at least to me)

7. reading will improve your writing

8. editors are devine until #9 is completed

9. writers enjoy killing editors

hope this made you smile, keep writing
Ariel of Wonderland chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
Wonderful job dear, and the sentiment was just as wonderful. Great job.
Ammom chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
I think it's sweet, how you made this for your friend, and how this feeling and development came from what that person said. :)