I feel so neglectful. My apologizies, again, good sir.

Personally, I think I'm in love with Alice. I love her sadistic childishness and glee. Her personality makes me shiver and giggle. And Hugo is rather.. enchanting in his own special ways. Your characters are all original. That's what keeps me coming to this story.

Did I ever mention that I have a friend named Theo? (pronounced "Tay-Oh" - not sure if yours is "Thee-Oh" or not) I keep getting the mental image of him as I read this, which is amusing in itself. Ah, anyway... update soon.

~ Much love,

Bleached Roses

So good to see you're putting more of the gangs in this scene! Vampire group dynamic is absolutely luscious. Will be checking back for more! Keep it coming!

Wow. Hugo seems very, very scary. D:

love it so far! vampires are quite possibly the most intriguing of the fantasy players. i also like the diversity you've created so early on among your group of "pale people" and how readily you wrap your readers up in their world!

i would value and appreciate your opinion (as a fellow vampire enthusiast) on my story, Four Letter Words. I really need an experienced vampire writer's POV.

Either way, great read!

i ran into your story today and i have to say, i find it oddly amusing and a really good read. keep up the good work. you've definitely defined each of your characters personalities meaning that half of the battle is already won. i'm absolutely enjoying your story.

HA! I'm so excited! I'm glad that you've taken the new outlook of him seeing it two ways. Most people just have the new guy whine a bit then neer mention him getting over it. it's cool to see some conflict in Theo's character, but remember there should be more of that as the story goes along. Very nice. I give you 5 bananas out of 5!

Love it, awesome fun. I'm getting a lot of VTM references (malkavian anyone?) but they're good.

Keep writing!

I feel so horrible for not reading this sooner. -sighs- Please forgive me! But I must say, I'm in love with it. Vampires always have a way of capturing my heart. By the way, the name Theodore.. did you purposely search for a name that would mean "God's gift" or was it an accidental twist that added to your story?

~ Much love,

Bleached Roses

Very cool! I can't wait to read the rest! I hope the next chapter is out soon! Good job and keep it up! And 10 bucks says Theo falls for the girl. lol.

another great chapter! can we be expecting another one soon?

Quite ironic how I should browse through some "All the Wrong Places" reviews, then find you uploaded a story of your own.. it's intriguing and I look forward to more.

~: Aarseth

oh that was really really really good. please update soon, I'm dying to know what happens next!