Reviews for Should Stay One's Own
in the city of neon and chrome chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
this is a review for just everything you write:

you're incredible. your poetry makes me want to dance and fuck and sing and cry all at the same time (this poem especially).

you've got realreal talent; don't let it go to waste.


lymli chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
that's an interesting story, I like the starting, the imagery are good.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
That was a very disturbing poem. But very well-written. I'm not sure what to say, because I feel like anything I would say would pale in comparison to the message of the poem. Beautiful. Keep writing! :)
she smolders chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
The power in the last three lines astounds me.