Reviews for NeedWantLeave
Luma chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
This is wonderful! I love the beginning, but the whole piece is of course amazing :) And the last 6 lines are really powerful. I adore it from beginning to end.

take care,

Lisa
tini5585 chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
I love the first five lines of this poem, but I did get a little confused with the second half...maybe it's just me being brain-fried at this point in time. Are they fighting each other? Or fighting the urge to stay and do what they really want? Anyways, you continue to impress me :)