Reviews for There's Something in the Woods
Michael Panush chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
I liked the opening and the feel of this story, but I think it needed a few little changes. I didn't like the way the viewpoint switched around so often. It seemed to be first with the hunters, then the woman, and then her rescuer. Maybe if you just had paragraph breaks or some * every so often, it would make the story more palatable. That abouts my only complaint, and I look forward to more soon.
Zigellus chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
_ Nice I remember you giving me this little story earlier. -Whisper- I know what she is. -Zips mouth shut- :x