Reviews for Avec Clarté
MeLu Leigh Reed chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
this is katie
TaltushMeiMei chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
This is wonderful. It's got a great rhythm and flow, a slightly old-fashioned feel to it, and a huge amount of feeling in it. It's got beauty and emotion all wrapped up in one neat package. I love how there are almost-rhymes, but it's more for flow than actually rhyming. The repetition is also very well-placed. It doesn't take away from the poem and emphasizes that aspect. Great writing coupled with a good flow and an originality factor (it feels very personalized) make this into a really great poem.