I like seth the best. Great story. :)

She is such a (insert bad word here)

This was awesome, really awesome...

You probably wouldn't do a back handspring into a full twist. You'd do a hurdle round off.

really great already

i really like the dialogue between all the characters - they're very witty!

I was re-reading it. Yep, still my fav story EVER. Really. Thank Raven for me, won't ya!

i absolutely adore your writing style. IMPRESSIVE. cant wait for the story on seth and trina :D

These stories are like Cigarettes. They stink, they leave you with a nasty taste in your mouth, and you're sort of ashamed you smoke them. But I just can't stop reading.

Woah. Mikhail is intense-spine-tingling really. This was great, keep writing!

Kudos,

E.

“But can Jadeite handle himself?” i really liked that line. i also enjoyed the chapter. you did a nice job of making it interesting and attention-grasping. great job.

i enjoyed it. the conflict starting out the chapter was interesting and you did well establishing what close friends they are at the end. nice chapter!

heu this story was great! cant wait for trina and seths!

the best thing in the whole story is the personalities! they are very realistic...it's like yor not trying to sugar coat the truth and i complement you on your achievment...excuse my spelling...

hope you put the first chapter soon

best of luck

~i was bornbrilliant but education ruined moi ;p

WoW! thats all i can say 4 this story. its nothing short of awesome. i also luv how u keep the characters in role. :)

wow iloveyuursotry; and i cant wiat to read trina&seth's story