Reviews for Shining Star
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
Good poem.

I like the title.

Good luck with poetry and life.

Have a wonderful day. :)

~Twilight Starr~
Ariel of Wonderland chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
Lovely. Lovelylovelylovely. Wonderful work, dear.
Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
For some reason this poem reminds me of lost innocence. The imagery is amazing. I loved it, i think its the thought process thats so cutting: " I didn't know they had those kinds here." Great work.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
Perfect ending. Really beautiful phrasing. Amazing as always.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
Oh how sad. I really loved the images though. So pretty, in a dismal way. Good job.

And just wondering, do you think I'll be able to get that kitchen set? You have no idea how long I've waited for an opportunity like this, for someone to finally realize my goody goodness and give me all the plastic toys I could possibly ever desired! :D