This makes me think of my musical-family at school. We were such a tight cast. From the very beginning, we told each other it was us against the world. This kinda shows parts of that love, I think... at least, that's what I get from it. )

Add more poems! All your poems are spectacular.

I like this... the stanza about satisfaction is awesome as is the lines about the ipods... and I love the ending...thanks for the reviews

I love this! It is exactly how I feel right now. You have a wonderful way with words. :D Thanks for sharing them.

I really like this...I have empathy, too. I think that it was very well written. I don't think that the adjective "shitty" did too much for the poem, I think you could have used something stronger without cursing, but that is just my opinion (and I understand the need to do so, I've done so before in my works, too) I just think it might be stronger that way. Nonetheless, this was excellent. Good work. Keep writing. )

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i reaallyy like the first two verses? stanzas? whatever word. the first two of those. especially where it says. fill their minds with happy lies

i like

that

but

I LIKE YOU MORE

lawl

and. i could hear ur voice at the end

but oh trust me...

Nice! I love it, i can definitely relate to everything. I love the refrence to i-pods. You need to write more! . . .come to think of it so do i. . .

I think you should remove iPod and put instead something else, it's a good idea but it disrupts the flow, the same with the profanity. There's a place for it but poems aren't it.

Ohh that was really powerful, I really love it foo! Its so true, everyone likes to decieve their thoughts and lies with music. No one really does care, and you've portrayed it very well that we need to live for ourselves and not care what other people think of us.

Oh, this is great. I really identify with it. I just wish the ending was true for me too.. unless it means the narrator is dead or something! :/ Anyway, I'm glad you broke your writer's block. )