ABSOLUTELY WONDERFULLY FANTASTIC. :)

This is officially one of my favorite stories, I spent the whole day on the computer reading it, great job!

Oh I'm such a sap for happy endings, it makes my world go round.

Hey! I'm so very sorry I took forever to finally finish reading this story, but I must say that reading it all over again has just made it enjoyable. I loved the way that the characters developed, and I loved the idea of Melanie and Adam from the start. That pacing, which I commented on before, I know, was a bit iffy at times, and it seemed drawn out, but I think it did well considering all of the things happening and it made the tension better. I loved the way that it was also about other characters, not just those involved in the love triangle, and you made it seem so realistic, and I enjoyed it so much. It was such an amazing story and I must congratulate you. It was awesome. I felt it was realistic (although Mel's mom kind of scared me, haha) and the characters were great and developed nicely. I enjoyed the way it was written and just how everything came to a somewhat sentimental close at the end. It was long, but it reminded me of many of the novels I'd pick up and read, so it was great. I liked how you made it hard to hate any of the main characters even if at times you wanted to because of how they were involved with the plot. Although Melanie frustrated me quite a few times because it was quite plain to see that Adam was so into her. XD But anyways, I enjoyed the story so much, and thank you for sharing it. :) Amazing job! :)

loved it

:) glad they ended up together.

Keep writing more great stories xx :D

I'm glad it ended happily, Adam and Melanie finally ended up together. This was one of my favorite stories to follow/read. I might read Ronnie's story too.

thank you! And I think it ended perfectly.

:D

yay cant wait for the sequel.

man i've been into this story for a long time & im glad to see it finished a bit sad tho :\ yeh and adam is def my ideal man too D

SO AMAZING!

i loved this story. so good. )

i really love your story. there will still be a next chapter after this, right? i just cant wait for the next one. nd i dont really want it to end, not yet.

keep up the good work, i really admire you with this kind of story.

I think this was my favorite chapter, because mel and adam got togother but what i dont get is, didnt derek hate mina? Oh well i still liked it. But what was her dision when she was going to go talk to derek? Was she going to breck up with him? Or stay with him? Oh and i so totally have a Darth Vader t-shirt to. Lol.

I'm glad they kissed again!

It may not have been the best time (Adam can't be a rebound, even though we all knew they'd be together anyways), but if it didn't happen then, it would have taken forever to actually happen!

Are they actually going to sleep together? Or just make out?

I'm sure I'll figure out next chapter!

(love it, by the way)

Your going to be an amazing author someday (Y)

i love this story & adam i love him so much hes nice & hes hot & im so happy this worked out! )

cant wait for the next chapter..

man i wish adam was real! he seems actually 2 perfect.

& i was so expecting that from Derek!

xx

Ah... it's about time those two got together... FINALLY! yay

oh my gosh! A double update! And right before my birthday. That defiantley makes me happy. Well that and that the twilight movie is coming out friday but enough blabbering I love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love this though I only read chapter 29 but i was so excited that I had to review before I even read the chapter so thank for updating!