Reviews for Wasted
J chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
hmm.. :narrows eyes at you:

so whats on your mind eh?

nice,

i liked it.

keep writing.

completely stop consuming all forms of caffiene and see if it helps the sleep situation at ALL..

if that doesnt work you can call me and ill tell you my life story untill you fall asleep.

oh yes.

and quit smoking, asshole.

ily.
Rachelll chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
as I was reading this, I started sing-song-ing..it.. XD... I dunno, I liked it though o.o
Amorelle chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
aww he seems so sad *hugs the narrator*
Choke on this chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
i like it. i like how the repetition emphasizes the feelings of resentment in the poem.