Reviews for SemiMeaningful
sincerely disregard chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
This was sweet in a nice depressing way, which is a good thing despite the complete nonsense it makes. Right.

Some typos and constructive criticism though: (parenthesis) for changes and [brackets] for omissions.

-"There is a certain sense of tranquility when theya re (they are) able"

-"the hem of his [of] comfortable"

-"Every time I get a new cell phone & transfer the numbers, there is a group of obsolete numbers, the numbers of those whose number has changed and the numbers of those who I don’t ever call anymore and don’t ever plan to call again." is slightly awkward, basically says numbers to many times.

I think that's it. This really is nice, and I really love the use of the word routine as a divider between the perspective shifts.