Reviews for SemiMeaningful |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was sweet in a nice depressing way, which is a good thing despite the complete nonsense it makes. Right. Some typos and constructive criticism though: (parenthesis) for changes and [brackets] for omissions. -"There is a certain sense of tranquility when theya re (they are) able" -"the hem of his [of] comfortable" -"Every time I get a new cell phone & transfer the numbers, there is a group of obsolete numbers, the numbers of those whose number has changed and the numbers of those who I don’t ever call anymore and don’t ever plan to call again." is slightly awkward, basically says numbers to many times. I think that's it. This really is nice, and I really love the use of the word routine as a divider between the perspective shifts. |