Reviews for The Girlfriend
Carmel March chapter 13 . 2/24/2008
Lovely job. You've got a serious talent!

Keep it up. I'm loving it :)

~Carm~
x.betweenthelines chapter 13 . 2/24/2008
oh cool!

Liv's back!

i like her character. ]
KatieTheWriter chapter 2 . 2/24/2008
oh this is getting good!
KatieTheWriter chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
Interesting first chapter. I can't wait to read more! Good job.
HollowxPromises chapter 13 . 2/24/2008
Aww cute chapter...

Obviously Justin's gotta find out right?

Oh and I still vote an educational experience.
outsidersgirl chapter 13 . 2/24/2008
a good chapter
malloluvsya chapter 12 . 2/14/2008
Aww, I feel bad for Liv. I mean, I LOVE Justin and Emma together, but I really hope she's not hurt. Justin is so freaking adorably sweet to Emma. And I am actually reading your other story which I love. I wouldn't mind you continuing it.
Just Me chapter 12 . 2/12/2008
Who would Liv end up with? Will? That would probably factor in deciding about which story to write. Also, what's 'An Educational Experience' about? Is it another romance?
sleepsweet chapter 12 . 2/12/2008
Great job, can't wait to see the end! You'd think this Justin was THE prize to be won. :P Emma is really female public enemy #1. So how many chapters are left, do you think?
HollowxPromises chapter 12 . 2/12/2008
Nice chapter...

Oh I wanna know who's going to end up with who!

I personally found that an educational experience...wasn't that easy to get into.

A couple of minor errors:

"You're getting discharged from the hospital tomarrow morning.""

Obvious spelling mistake there.

and there's an enter button error with "the nurse shook her head"
shelivesinafairytale chapter 12 . 2/12/2008
Hey!

So... I'm surprised... Liv is love with Justin? That will complicate things a little bit, han?

About the new story... I think you should continue 'An educational Experience'. I like it very very much!

xoxo.

Kah
simplycarol chapter 12 . 2/12/2008
no.

how can liv like justin.

i'm sad now.

well

anyway

update soon
Siana chapter 11 . 2/12/2008
Very cute; I like it! The belladonna is a nice touch. Natural poisons are so much more interesting than pharmaceutical ones...
outsidersgirl chapter 12 . 2/12/2008
this is good
obsessivecompulsivehobbit chapter 11 . 2/7/2008
Aww! What a cute chapter to return to! And is what you said, really the treatment for poisoning by deadly nightshade? LOL, amazing what people can google these days isn't it? I am still really hooked on this story, and I hope you were being honest about bring out the next chapter faster because I'm really looking forward to it! Until then! )
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