Hey! I really really really love your story! I was soo keen to get through the chapters that you had posted, but now I'm quite upset that I have nothing more to read. And the idea that your attention will be split between this and another story, does not inspire confidence in me, since all I really want is for you to update very soon. Story wise, I'm a little iffy about Emma and Will's "relationship", but in consideration of a character like Justin, he'd need the jealousy to realise what he has rather than what he had. I really can't wait for E&J's first kiss, lol, but I've got a feeling that you'll play it down. I'm not good at providing critism, but I think it is helpful overall for an author, so the only thing I can really think of saying, is that I think you should invest in a Beta reader. Just someone to look at your story through fresh eyes to catch you're occasional typo, or missing common word. It doesn't detract from the story too much, so it's no big deal, but it is something to think about. I really actually can't believe that you have such few reviews, you definitely deserve much more! I can't wait for your next chapter, hope it comes soon. Until then. )

Brilliant! I'm still hooked. This was a pretty short chapter but no matter. Good job!

Poor Emma that she's sick...I'm glad that Will's worried over her

cant wait for more! I love it

uh oh, the food was drugged, wasn't it?

How rude, pulling her hair. Damn, that pisses me off! Your story is really good! Hope you update soon!

hmm.. i wonder if that waitress and that NASTY food

will have anything to do with the story... later on?

haha. and will, maybe he'll start liking her and all.

then justin and his oblivious self will start getting

jealous :) PLEASE UDPATE!

Wow, this is the first story i read on fictionpress, and i gotta say that your story really got me hooked! I'm really impressed by your writting style and your plot, i especially love how everything seems to make sense! I hope you update the next chapter soon!

lol...is will going to be her father figure?

Love the story. Will seems nice, cute & friendly. I bet its gonna be between him & Justin who will fall in love with her huh?Please update soon!

wow,that was awsome!I feel bad for Emma,she's being attacked because she's justin girlfrined...what a reason,lol!

YAY! Nice job. Honestly, you are a very good writer. I haven't been bored yet since the prologue! Great job! I'm realy curious to see how this all ends. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Sounds very interesting so far. Though, Emma doesn't seem to have much of a backbone, does she?

This was a really good chapter. I like how you made the characters so realistic. :D I only wish that there would be an encounter between Justin and Isabelle where Justin actually ends it somehow. I REALLY don't like her.

I am not sure about Justin but I like Will better, he saved her three times...but Justin seems doesnt care about her...I think that Will likes her...cant wait for the next chapter

Loved the chapter.

It made me giggle when she thinks about causing him pain-she sounds so happy. However I think you double speech marks around that part.

Will seems to like her... :D

Or am I reading into the lines too much?

Next chapter please!