| Reviews for The Girlfriend |
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   blurrylights chapter 16 . 10/10/2008 Sorry, but that's really unrealistic. The way he met Emma isn't that bad. He should rather have that out than marry Isabelle. Isn't that common sense? Anyway, this was a so so chapter. I hope it gets more relatable in the upcoming chapters. But the writing was still great! :) |
| blurrylights chapter 15 . 10/10/2008 Poor Emma. I knew Will was a weirdo. Maybe she'll get back with Justin now? Let's hope! :) |
| blurrylights chapter 14 . 10/10/2008 Poor Emma...i really do think she overreacted though. I mean, stupid is a word people just use randomly. Other than that, it was a cool chapter. Will's apartment? Sounds kind of sketchy...other than that, great job! :) |
| blurrylights chapter 13 . 10/10/2008 They're "in love" already? That's a little unbelievable, but it's okay. I like Liv even more now! And Justin and Emma are so cute together! :) |
| blurrylights chapter 12 . 10/10/2008 Wow...that's sad. What's going to happen now? |
| blurrylights chapter 11 . 10/10/2008 I WAS RIGHT! A HA! :) How clairvoyant am I? And why is Jess there? Where are the parentals? I guess I'll find out soon enough. :P |
| blurrylights chapter 10 . 10/10/2008 Maybe it was that food she ate? Oh...maybe Isabella hired people to feed her poison! Though that would be a little out there...but I don't know. I guess I'll see! |
| blurrylights chapter 9 . 10/10/2008 Will seems so nice! I hope he's not an introverted perv or anything. And poor Emma. Those girls are freaks...how could no one see that? This chapter was a little unrealistic, but still very well written! |
| blurrylights chapter 8 . 10/10/2008 Oh...Emma's getting jealous? :) I can't wait to see what happens at the premiere! And I don't get why Isabelle is so jealous...she should just let it go and move on. |
| blurrylights chapter 7 . 10/10/2008 Emma is that isolated? She knows nothing about movies? Anyway...awesome chapter! I like Olivia and Eric already! :) |
| blurrylights chapter 6 . 10/10/2008 Isabelle sounds mean! And blue hands? How exciting...:) |
| blurrylights chapter 5 . 10/10/2008 Oh my god! That was so sweet! :) |
| blurrylights chapter 4 . 10/10/2008 Wow...they do get into a lot of compromising situations, don't they? It's okay...they're cute together. I like the influence Emma will have on him. :) |
| blurrylights chapter 3 . 10/10/2008 Maybe he's not so obnoxious? I don't know...but this isn't good. I'm supposed to be writing the next chapter for my Romance story, and here I am reading yours. *Sigh* What can I do? You story is too tempting. :) |
| blurrylights chapter 2 . 10/10/2008 Nice...Justin seems obnoxious. No offense, but he really does. I like this story a lot so far. Your writing style is excellent, and you work description into the story naturally. :) |