Reviews for The Girlfriend
blurrylights chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
I really like how she doesn't know he's a movie star...makes for an interesting character. I don't know her name, but she seems like a nice person. Great chapter! :)
sooner or later its over chapter 2 . 10/10/2008
really interesting so far :)

it'll be interesting to see what you do with the story
Poetess111 chapter 21 . 10/10/2008
Congrats on your first finished story! I look forward to reading whatever you come up with next. : )
Carmel March chapter 19 . 9/14/2008
This story always manages to make me a happy happy person, with each and every update :) Great chapter. Can't wait for the next bit! And sorry I took so long to review!

~Carm~
sleepsweet chapter 19 . 8/26/2008
WOT I'm so excited. I hope everything works out! I can't wait for the end and it had better be a "happily ever after" or I'll die and you'll have to hear me rant about it when I call you afterwards. :D
XxAbandonedAngelxX chapter 19 . 8/22/2008
I love this! I can't wait for the next chapter!
DiamondPrincess25 chapter 19 . 8/20/2008
please update ur story is awesome!
violet-eyez chapter 19 . 8/19/2008
finally
outsidersgirl chapter 19 . 8/17/2008
this is good
Leah chapter 14 . 7/17/2008
Wow, I loved this story up to the point where they got to the hotel in New York. After that everything just seemed to go down hill for me. I liked Emma's character but now she kind of just seems like a dumb, jealous teenager who overreacts too much for her own good. Sorry, I don't mean to be rude but it just seems that Emma's personality changed too dramatically really fast. D;
TopazOwl chapter 16 . 7/15/2008
I feel like what Will did was incredibly out of character. He was absolutely perfect-better than Justin-up until that one point. I feel a bit disappointed. I expected her to still get with Justin (grumble), but I still wanted to root for Will.
violet-eyez chapter 18 . 7/14/2008
so fast...and why doesn't he want to be found
HollowxPromises chapter 18 . 7/13/2008
Oh!

Wonderful twist!

You thought it might all wrap up there, but it didn't. Love it :D

I think you made a typo:

Her instead of her, when she's trying to get into Will's appartment.

Update soon!
x.betweenthelines chapter 18 . 7/13/2008
LOL. You can always rely on Liv right?

D
BebeEllis chapter 18 . 7/13/2008
ahh! next chapter plz!
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