omg. so good. :)

Scratch out Isabelle's eyes!

Will sounds like a really nice guy, I hope it stays that way because I know in some stories people don't keep it like that. lol. )

I can't believe Justin took Isabelle's hand, especially when all Emma wanted to was to keep his reputation good!

Poor Liv as well, at least she prefers Justin with Emma. Hmm...what next?

To freakin lazy to actually sign in..but

OH NO!

How could Justin do something like that.

what a * jerk..

I hope Emily really lashes out at him...

sounds great

What is up with Will

Great chapter I'm still rooting for Will, I hope he and Emma together, Liv and Jason get together

hi i am just gonna start reading this... and btw i wanted to know where you came up with the name for the main character..emma lane? because as it happens my best friend is Emma Lane... yer weird eh

kk thanks

iloveflux

if i were emma i would have slap her

I love this story...DOWN WITH LIV!

aw...sweet so was it isabel who poisoned her?

Wow! Another two great chapters! And soo close to 100 reviews, let me say a quick congratulations already, since I'll end up being 99 or maybe even 100. That was some twist you put in there about Liv being in love with Justin! I guess since there aren't that many chapters left, I'm assuming that you wont do too much more damage to Emma and Justin's fragile relationship. If my assumption is wrong: I can only hope that you aren't too cruel. Can't wait to see what comes out of your brain next! Until then, I hope you update soon! )

I really like this.

:)I love this story! When Liv confronted Emma, I actually held my breath with anticipation to see what would happen! You really have come a long way from those stories you wrote when we were younger! I really love this story and with this recent development with Liv, I would love to see a sequel with her and read her happy ending (she deserves one!)

Ha, okay, so you covered the IV, and you addressed Justin about it too. Good. :) Baby... Michael, is it? was fleshed out a bit, which is good, but you could also have built that up a little. Also, the emotion that Emma has about Liv feels a little put on. She went from very comfortable with Liv to "I don't want to hear you talk about her". It just feels a little strange from this view point.

Altogether, I really like the story (especially how Justin brought over Jess's husband and children!), but I wish you were drawing it out a bit more. There's so much that could be made meatier, and it would give quite a few fun opportunities for things like run-ins with the paparazzi, meeting other celebs, and so on.

I like the way the story is going, but Jess's difficulties with her new baby are a little quickly done, perhaps? Unless she had the baby in the morning, she wouldn't really be able to leave the hospital the next day, let alone fly to New York for him to have surgery.

Also...

When Emma chases after Liv, where's her IV?

Only family members are allowed to stay overnight (or husbands), so why is Justin special enough? Even as a celebrity, he wouldn't have the clout to change that rule.

Emma's realization with Liv seems a little fantastic for only having known her a few days, and only having her say those few things about them being close. If you wanted to have her realize it, you could possibly have had her mention it to Justin and he shed some light on it, but I don't think that given the circumstances, Emma would have realized that straight away.

If I'm wrong on any of these, you're welcome to say so - I don't claim to be a doctor or anything - but you might want to also explain things like that in the text for those like me who think otherwise.