Reviews for Star on My Back
BacchaeBombshell chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
More pleasee?

:DD
Aqua-eagle Sunshine chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
I think it was a good beginning...but you need to go over some of your sentences and try to make them flow better. I like his name 'Haku' reminds of the boy from spirited away. The girl seems quite yet also wuite outspoken in the way she asks him a personal question. Overall i think it was good.
TheMonomaniacalGoblin chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
I liked the first paragraph, and lots of people could relate to that _

But the part that really captured me was Haku not being able to answer the question; it was completely realistic, and captured many of the "in class moments" without being cliche.

Awesome job! ;D
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Interesting...you're going to have to elaborate, thought, I can't tell what it's about just yet. But venture forward, and I'm sure it'll turn out good!
kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
Very good!
InkySubstance chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
Good, I really liked the first paragraph.