Reviews for In splend'rous disregard for time
Not Afraid of Bruises chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
some advice so this review is actually useful:

1. show, don't tell

2. pity parties only on special occations

3. vary stentence structure and word choice

4. always read your words out loud

5. a poem only pauses if there is a comma, period, etc (don't forget them, even if you are doing slam poetry)

6. details and images are very important (at least to me)

7. reading will improve your writing

8. editors are devine until #9 is completed

9. writers enjoy killing editors

hope this made you smile, keep writing