Reviews for Loaded
Liya Smith chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
This was amazingly written. I loved reading this. Good job on it!
confused.girl93 chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
wow...that is but why did she stop? is she going to go through with it later on in life or was it a one time thing? i feel kinda bad for saying this about attempted suicide but cool story.
animebuddy chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Luffles. I want to hug you, your writing intrigues me. :)
madebeautiful chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
That was really well writen. I liked how you ended it.
Ravina chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
I'm going to risk sounding cheesy and say this: What IS loaded is this piece of writing.

I usually don't read such short pieces, but I'm glad I made an exception with this one. This is definitely going on my favourites!

- Rebekah
Clandestiny chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
I like this a just goes to show just how much can happen in a single moment.