Reviews for Judas's Kiss
ShylaC47 chapter 8 . 6/6/2016
You switch from future to present tense a lot.
jennshar67 chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
Latterly a few minutes ago it was 11:11 so I wished this would be a great fic and it worked!:) I'm not even done with the first chapter and I love it. Great job
JeneyaStorm chapter 16 . 5/25/2011
First of all Raine's a complete idiot for letting Ivan use him like that.

Other than that Raine is just soo i cant describe him but i know i like him...

Lindt and Ivan are jerks and with all that noise I'm surprised Raine's mom doesnt know

Personally i thought Raine would come out on top ya know

It kinda feels like pwp? hmm i'm not tryna flame or anything butttt just sdaying...

I do hope you finish this story one day? in the near future?
ScreamsInTheDark chapter 15 . 12/9/2010
I love this story it's amazing I'm looking forward to the next chapter I can't wait to see what happens bettween the to boys
mari chapter 16 . 11/10/2010
Your still doing this right? its fantastic!
awesome-lobes-you chapter 16 . 3/14/2010
please, please, please...continue.

update soon?

anyways, i love it so far, can't wait to see what happens nex!:)
anon chapter 16 . 1/31/2010
are you going to continue this?
FerrumOvisAries chapter 16 . 12/27/2009

I might just die a little inside if this isn't updated soon after seeing the last update was almost a year ago.
Veneya chapter 16 . 11/29/2009
Poor Raine...i feel sorry for him:(

plzz update next chapter

reni chapter 16 . 11/28/2009
gr...Ivan is a f*ing a**hole and a jerk!

i feel sorry for Raine
vampirezombieduck chapter 16 . 9/22/2009
Ivan D

poor Raine D

update soon XD
Shinigamigirl87 chapter 16 . 6/10/2009
Nyu! Why the slutty cheerleader? Why? Aww, I was greatly depressed when I realized I was at the last chapter. Must update soon! Love it!
Mz. Marie chapter 16 . 4/13/2009

This is not happening! Poor Raine!

Just so you know I have fallen in love with him and if Ivan continues to mess his head up like that I will smack him silly!

GAH! I've read it all in one sleepy hour and now I'm hyperventilating!


Miss Shortyy...x
CrimsonVampireWerewolf chapter 16 . 3/14/2009
Wow this is really really good you should contiue

i feel bad for raine tho poor baby :(
bandgirlz chapter 16 . 3/3/2009
Poor Raine. I don't know if I can keep reading this - I think one day Ivan's going to permanently injure Raine, and I'm not even sure he'll feel that bad about it.

As far as the plot though (engaging as it is!), it doesn't seem to be moving forward anymore. It seems to be stuck in this cycle that starts with Ivan abusing Raine, feeling bad, doing something nice, and then just going back to abusing him. How do we get out of the cycle?
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