Reviews for Judas's Kiss |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You switch from future to present tense a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Latterly a few minutes ago it was 11:11 so I wished this would be a great fic and it worked!:) I'm not even done with the first chapter and I love it. Great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() First of all Raine's a complete idiot for letting Ivan use him like that. Other than that Raine is just soo i cant describe him but i know i like him... Lindt and Ivan are jerks and with all that noise I'm surprised Raine's mom doesnt know Personally i thought Raine would come out on top ya know It kinda feels like pwp? hmm i'm not tryna flame or anything butttt just sdaying... I do hope you finish this story one day? in the near future? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story it's amazing I'm looking forward to the next chapter I can't wait to see what happens bettween the to boys |
![]() ![]() Your still doing this right? its fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please, please, please...continue. update soon? anyways, i love it so far, can't wait to see what happens nex!:) |
![]() ![]() are you going to continue this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ;-; I might just die a little inside if this isn't updated soon after seeing the last update was almost a year ago. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Raine...i feel sorry for him:( plzz update next chapter thnkz:D |
![]() ![]() gr...Ivan is a f*ing a**hole and a jerk! i feel sorry for Raine |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ivan D poor Raine D update soon XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nyu! Why the slutty cheerleader? Why? Aww, I was greatly depressed when I realized I was at the last chapter. Must update soon! Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! NO! NO! NO! This is not happening! Poor Raine! Just so you know I have fallen in love with him and if Ivan continues to mess his head up like that I will smack him silly! GAH! I've read it all in one sleepy hour and now I'm hyperventilating! UPDATE SOON! Miss Shortyy...x |
![]() ![]() Wow this is really really good you should contiue i feel bad for raine tho poor baby :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Raine. I don't know if I can keep reading this - I think one day Ivan's going to permanently injure Raine, and I'm not even sure he'll feel that bad about it. As far as the plot though (engaging as it is!), it doesn't seem to be moving forward anymore. It seems to be stuck in this cycle that starts with Ivan abusing Raine, feeling bad, doing something nice, and then just going back to abusing him. How do we get out of the cycle? |