Reviews for Fur and Feathers
Guest chapter 18 . 2/26
I found this while reading rose vines for the third time? The plot points here are good but you have progressed so much as a writer since you published this. It would be amazing to see what you could do with this idea now.
FallenCrest chapter 18 . 12/8/2013
I truly enjoyed this story. A strong character development on sash's part, but not much for inu's. Words flowed perfectly together which made reading this smooth and easy to read. And most of all, it kept me intrigued and captivated, I honestly did not once try to skim any paragraphs because I tend to do that sometimes sup this goes to show I pretty loved the storyline and concept of forbidden you create a sequel, I'll definitely read it if you consider writing one. Thank you.
leomonta chapter 18 . 7/14/2013
Aww. That was such a touching story. I'm sorry I don't have much to say but I beloved you deserved a review anyway.
DianaArty89 chapter 18 . 6/28/2013
adorable
Dumb Katt chapter 18 . 6/1/2013
CONTINUATION OF STORY! :O PLEASEEEEEEEEE!
Guest chapter 17 . 2/20/2013
Once again, you weave a story with beautiful and amazing details. Thank you.
stalker01 chapter 18 . 10/15/2012
The last sentence's just brilliant! XD Calling Sasha's story an antic.
And this is one of the most fulfilling endings in fictionpress history!
breakthehabit chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Yo! So I read your story over the summer, I had no net [saved it on a usb] and I thought you might like a review, though it's mostly commentary. Here it is!

Chapter 5: Uh oh. Secrets are bad. Great story so far. :D
Chapter 12: And the plot thickens! Hannah and Kelandra, perhaps?
Chapter 14: Eff the last sentence on that chapter. :P Guess I was right about Hannah and Kelandra. ;P Happy for em.
Chapter 15: O_O
Chapter 18: Aww. It ended. :X
fellintothemoon chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Hell there! Fur and Feathers had been added to our site A Drop of Romeo under the Slash category. YAY! Here's your review:

Melissa Thinks: Fur and Feathers takes place in a world where two clans, the Airans and the Werewolves, live at war with each other. Sasha is a werewolf and not just any werewolf, but she’s also the clan leader’s daughter. As such, she must live up tot the expectations of the pack. Things go eiry when she meets Inu, an exiled Airan in trouble and after saving each other's lives, it is their duty, as is set by their clans, to serve a life debt to one another. Sasha, as a crooked-tail (a werewolf who fancies the same sex), she finds Inu a little too attractive for her clan's liking. She must keep Inu a secret and in the process she may just fall in love.

I can always appreciate a good femmeslash story and as the Supernatural/Fantasy judge, it was a treat to read a mixture of the both. The first chapter set up the awesome world our characters live in, making me want to learn more and more about it as the story progressed. Shape shifters can sometimes be terribly cliché, but Fur and Feathers twisted the idea into something original. Sasha, as a main character, was strong and resilient with a bit of a softer side; I thought the author portrayed her well. And Inu was a sweetie pie and provided a nice mate for Sasha. There was a bit of a grammar issue at the beginning of the story, but it does improve in later chapters. There was also a little stiffness to the dialogue (one of my pet peeves), but it shouldn't be too much of a bother to any of you. If you're looking for something fresh and new, this is a story you should for sure check out.

-Melissa
Affair chapter 18 . 7/8/2011
Haha what a happy ending :) I sorta saw most of it coming but maybe I'm just an acute reader? Hehe. I enjoyed reading this, though I wished the ending was a little more dramatic and this story was long :p
Affair chapter 10 . 7/8/2011
Oh dear sasha has got herself in a bind, 2 girls O_O well.. Inu sounds awesome :)
Affair chapter 3 . 7/8/2011
I get it! She's half airan, and might be the cause of the great war or something.. They broke the rules, stupid birds :p
With a Side of Chocolate chapter 18 . 6/27/2011
This really was a wonderful story. The plot flowed easily and the characters were very original. Good job :)
sirozorg chapter 18 . 3/4/2011
Great story!
Greye chapter 18 . 11/2/2010
Wow! This was a really great read, thank you so much. (And I happen to like cheesy endings too, it was very sweet!)

I've read some of your other things too, like Not so Happily Ever After, and I really like your work. Keep it up! I hope you publish a book someday.
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