|Reviews for come back to where you belong|
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
i'm vaguely aware of the
that us fictionpressers
are growing up together
and for some reason
are all having spontaneous heart aches.
| randompoetry chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
uhm, genius. enough said.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
I like the philosophical bent that this has. It examines a somewhat vague, but relatable situation from several angles, and intices the reader to spirit through the fruit to get to the pulp, if that makes any sense. I also like how you've slipped in specific descriptions to solidify the totality of the work. Very thought provoking. Good work. Hope all is well with you. MD:77.
| Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
Beautifully written. You're very talented.