Reviews for Vision in a Time of Unrest
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
oh this is beautiful.

i started off thining 'ew not again please'

(because i'm a little tired of people (me included) describing people like it's the end of the world.)

but the ending, second-from-last stanza on, made it great.

awesome job and really cool idea.
Yokotaashi chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
random idea, short and sweet
Ashes090909090909 chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
I loved the ending, so true. Especially loved the line about Sangria, the one word really helped with the mental image of the girl in the poem. Good job :)