Reviews for Ichthyo
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
I love poems with rich, unusual language. However, I think it’s really easy for writers who aim for that to overdo it. Poems can easily become too verbose and thorny. I think that this poem could swing either way—there are parts of this that are wonderfully vivid and rich with detail. But there are also parts that feel too ornate, so intricate that the words seemed tangled. I think this is a nice piece overall, but I would caution you to make sure your words don’t run away with you and make it appear like you are just trying too hard to impress. Keep up the good work!
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