I didn't like the end. At all.

It's not the usual 'Aw, already finished?' either. It's more that it fell totally flat for me.

First, I never found public humiliation of any form, entertaining. I think their payback, though somewhat a bit deserved, was way out of proportion. I tried to read it as fast as possible to get to the good stuff. Or so I thought... I didn't see Bobby change THAT MUCH that he would be so quickly such a good sport about it. From hothead to Master Zen, I didn't see that one coming.

The little synopsis-thingie about Alex and Chaz was a bit disappointing to me. That's definitely not what hooked me to all the previous chapters and I'm not really interested in how it played out. The way it was quickly delt with makes me think I may not be the only one either.

Which brings me to the main bone of contention with this final chapter: from the moment Bobby puked, I thought that this story might be one of the most interesting and intelligent love story I've read in a while. A bit ironic but yeah... Anyway, when I say love, I'm not talking about romance, but about friendship. Its intricacies are not very used and certainly not often with the hindsight there was in this story. So I was kind of expecting it to end on a more introspective and mature note.

Not my story, not my decision, of course but it doesn't mean I have to like it. So there.

wo go chaz he's awesome and funny. so does this mean bobby's bisexual

Good chapter. i don't like Chaz though. well you prolly figured that much about me already. i hate surprises and Chaz was sorta a surprise. well yea...i thought you went a little fast with having another weird relationship with a gay guy who i don't like. just saying though. and you know i'm not good at reviewing so just forget i said any of this and such.

As I was reading this story I couldn't help but fid Alex painfully naive when he was with Chris, the bastard. I was dying of anxiety that Alex wasn't being happy, I was so glad in the when he ended up with Chaz that nearly cried. I am so glad it had a happy ending.

another great chapter and i'm glad Chris is gone since i didn't like him that much. Renee is truly funny, she reminds me of myself though i don't say how cute boys would look together out loud, just in my head.

Can't wait for the next chapter

~Shounen-ai

woah...well i'm not that good at reviewing these kinds of stories but that chapter was nice..and well i don't know how to say it. The fact that i'm reviewing this says that you did a good job at writing this. I like Renee, you thought out her character well.

~Shounen-ai

Boy Love

I Love your stories. I was so sad when The Girl For Me Ended, Now this one's over too :(. Hope you start something new soon . THanks for the good read.

Gosh! This story was just... So good. I loved every bit of it. The way they are, the way they behave. Even their little joke to Bobby. Poor Bobby. If I heard that somebody just think to do the same to me, I'ld like to rip his head off. With my nails and teeth. And to forgive them... Maybe some says not 9 hours. Geez! Nice Bobby . Chaz's cool also. I said it before, I love them.

I hope you'll continue with that kind of stories. You've me for fan (that's english, isn't?)

wow...love the ending! their revenge was the best EVER! but bobby wasn't gay?...wow, still can't believe it...but he danced with Chaz! with alex there too! lol!

loved the ending!

Haha, I loved the whole beginning getting back at Bobby plan...so funny. And the epilogue was wicked cute

Good job :D

~Mia

"The End", "Complete" what? This totally snuck up on me and you didn't warn me at all! Ok, I've got myself under control now . . . .

Alex and Chaz's revenge on Bobby was freakin' perfect! I smiled the entire time I read it, even giggled a little bit too. :) Very funny.

I've really enjoyed this story of friendship between best friends - one gay, one straight. It's an interesting dynamic and you made it more so. Thanks.

*holds banner that reads FAILTE200* Ole ole ole ole

Didn't end the way that I thought it would, but that's okay. _So happy Alex finally got a boyfriend-a good boyfriend. Happy for Bobby too! Great story.

Damn that was a fast update! Do you just sit and write all day? :P

Sad it's over but it was such a good last chapter so I'm not disappointed. Alex and Chaz's trick on Bobby was so funny. xD And obviously I would have loved Alex and Bobby to get together, but alas! You just can't change a straight guy's mind. And I liked Alex and Chaz together too, so it's all good. :]

P.S. I just finished re-reading The Girl For Me. Damn I love that story. Shame there's never going to be a sequel. :[