Reviews for Children of Hollywood |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude, its been 8 years, you seriosly need to catch up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Tyler is a freak. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is getting really exciting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. You portray these high school kids very realistically. I mean, weren't we all a little "out-spoken" at that age, only to soon regret our outbursts? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am really enjoying this story. It's refreshingly different from most of the stories I read on hear. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read your other story yesterday and loved it, so I thought I would try this one. One chapter in and I can already tell I'm going to enjoy this one as well. You are a very good writer and I'm glad I came across these stories. |
![]() ![]() u hav got to update. Srsly, I am dying bc every good story I read is incomplete. Pls update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue! This story is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this story. I really love it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Type your review for this chapter here... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you not writing this story anymore? I very much enjoyed it and I would like to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't forget about this story finish it please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much! I really wish you would update, but I know after four years, the chances of that happening aren't very large... It's too bad though, because I so wanted to see how the story would have played out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so what happened to the 'I haven't dropped off the face of the planet' thing, cause it kinda looks like that's exactly what happened. Oh gosh just thought of a horrible scenario- you haven't written cause you're dead. That was a terrible thought! ok back to regular- this story has a lot of things going for it (Tyler not being one of them, creeper) and I really think you should continue writing! ...Maybe it's just me |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I have a hard time believing that Kendall would still 'barely stand Devon in person' because really one you spend a lot of time with someone and get to know them -I'm assuming ESPECIALLY if it's that intimately- you no longer hate them and usually probably don't even dislike them. Also I think if you had a little more lead up of like what they actually talked about and acted like around each other in Antarctica then they wouldn't be acting so much like this... |