Reviews for Lysisyl
criti-sized chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
Hey! It's been awhile since I've read anything of yours, but it's definitely nice to be reading something.

For the short, it's definitely interesting, but kind of hard to read because you didn't double space the new paragraphs. I like how you wrote it though, it makes for something smiple and great.

C.S.