Reviews for The End of Summer
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
This is just fantastic. What a great example of how to use a rhyme scheme. It seriously fits the piece, I think because it has this almost sing-song quality to it, and the piece is about that entering into another season, perhaps entering adulthood, as it were. God, I LOVE "to reclaim our ill-fitting skins." That is just fantastic. Gorgeous. This is so incredible. Fantastic work. Keep writing! :)