|Reviews for lost lovelies|
| in a jar pk chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
love it! x
| I.O.K.O chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
Simple but gets the point across (reiteration). I tried that once. It was annoying and I made it boring, yet broad where yours is not. And to answer the question- Dunno.
| dust to diamond chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
Hmm...I guess we all need to write something pretty for ourselves once in a while. If not, just to uplift yourself, but be careful to not let that little poem go from something just for you and positive, to be directed at someone else and turn to sour.
Regardless, neat short poem.
And to answer your question, I believe they return to the one place they all started: your heart. The affections you felt, those "lovelies" probably return to the state at which they first might have been nothing or shapeless.
I wonder if everything could be put into perspective like this...
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
interesting perspective. but i truly dont know.
| Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
Where do they go indeed. But at the end of the day, the lovely things ARE just things. Anyway, I liked how you have structured the lines. Repetition has also been used very effectively. *goes to read more*