|Reviews for Future|
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
I like this one too. I think the format here is nice. I like that lots.
| daretobe-dIfFeRnT chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
i read this as a song, i don't really know why...lol its good!
| Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
gorgeous. love it.
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
You have a bright future. :)
| found.eventually chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
that was good! there's one thing i don't really get, though.
a future i what I hope
I don't know what's next, except for darkness.
uh, so the darkness IS the future?
hahhaa. i suck at analysing poems. ehe.
| lymli chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
it sounds like a cool song, really the rhyme is good.