Reviews for Future
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
I like this one too. I think the format here is nice. I like that lots.
daretobe-dIfFeRnT chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
awh! sad!

i read this as a song, i don't really know its good!
Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
gorgeous. love it.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
Great poem.

You have a bright future. :)

~Twilight Starr~
found.eventually chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
that was good! there's one thing i don't really get, though.

a future i what I hope

I don't know what's next, except for darkness.

uh, so the darkness IS the future?

hahhaa. i suck at analysing poems. ehe.
lymli chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
it sounds like a cool song, really the rhyme is good.