Reviews for Guilty as Charged
Which Mistake am I chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
I like this and i now see what you mean that you have changed your writing style...to me its kind of wierd only because i can't tell what italized words aremenaing. Do you know what i'm talking about? well anyway i still like the poem.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
I really liked this. Yeah, I know. I like horribly sad depressing things. But the last stanza was really good. Also I adored:

"The tears in my eyes

fill up my writing with

cliché-ness.

But at least, they take

up lines."

Great job, as always. Now I feel like writing...
Daiysis chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
This is so sad... poor perosn. An excellent display of hope without faith. Cool... I love when you write like this which is actually often... yay!
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
Sad, but beautiful. Or maybe that should be the other way around. ...I'm sorry.

I love the part about the italicized voices.