|Reviews for Mental Message|
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
Generally I don't use smilies in reviews to state my feelings (makes people think you are young are something. ha! I'm so much younger than that). But anyway, The last line sums up my entire being. Wonderful poem. It reminds me of the book, "Love, Stargirl" (which is amazing by the way, and so is "Stargirl" and if you haven't read them yet you should!) when Stargirl sends her boyfriend a mental message from 10 miles away. Yeah, that is really random, but anyway, this was great! Wonderful job.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
Is that last line about "writer's block"?
I like how you fit so much into just a few lines.