Reviews for Late
Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Must admit I don't really get this... but I like the contrast "the eve of New Year's" and "thirty seconds too late". Made me smile :) You should keep writing!
CCPerson chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
I don't get it 100%, but I think Carmine should be uppercase
kit feral chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
I can't believe I've never read your work before.

You are truly amazing.

I love this.
Anesther chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
I'm probably missing something-as I'm very slow-but I loved the poem nonetheless. You have a very unique writing style and it conveys the story in so little words. Great work.
Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Creative simile, I like it. :)
FromMyBackyard chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
hahaha... that's creepy, especially when that's been my own life at times when it really counted that things go according to plan.

they never do.
Captain-Dalien chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
Very nice job. It was short, but effective. Life is ironic, isn't it? Kudos. ~CD
Lurid Black chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
Simple yet well written, I like this.

Thnx for the constructive criticism, i'll look out for things like those k. ]
tonight we storm chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
too good.
i'd delete this if possible chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
"she was bright, brilliant, and/thirty seconds too late." lovely. brought a smile to my face, that's for sure. :)
Autumn Lace chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
It was catchy. I liked it. Keep writing.

Honey Nut Loop and m-j chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
So true. Congratulations. You made me chuckle.
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
Very lovely personification and it's an amusing poem. You should post stuff like this, you don't see them often and I like being entertained by your works. Good job!

Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
Interesting poem. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
little boy on her bike chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
i love the sardonicasocity... and no, that's not a word.
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