Reviews for Without Tongues
FellowMan chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
Fantastic, really vivid/fun wording !
Jessie chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
This is so very spectacular. I have been away from your work for a while and upon returning I stumble upon this. You have such a beauty to you. You never cease to inspire and amaze me. What would you think about coming to Olympia some time this year and reading your work either to a small group of writers or in public (or both)? I would love to have you if you are willing?
the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
There was a plethora of great analogiers in this one. I always love the imagery you use in your poetry. its always so twisted and unique and well breathtaking.

the Stranger in the moonlight
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
That poem really sums up the desire of wanting what you can't have.

diffident chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
Agh the last line is amazingly succinct & appropriate & so perfect for this! This is such a great poem; there are so many intricacies in this and it's amazing. Basically. :]

All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
Beautiful poem, as always. (Don't I always start my reviews this way?) I loved the ending - it summed the whole piece up so beautifully. Kudos.