|Reviews for Making of a Melody|
| Zeurpiet chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
I like this. It produced some really lovely imagery and I particularly liked this last line. I think, however, that the rhyming detracts from the poem, but that's just me. I liked the bolding, italics, and underlining you used. Keep up the good work!
| TheDJ chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
I really liked this - (i love everything involving a musical undertone). Loved the phrase *communicable disease too* (I'm a med student :p).
Liked the way it was written, how u incorporated the imagery as well as just words (with bold and all that)
Keep the awesome writing up!
| The Angel in Black chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
I really like this. It describes exactly what I feel when I write. XD Good job!
| OneCoolKid chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
It's really good, I like it a lot.