Reviews for The Ones that got Lost
Unknown Sorrow chapter 4 . 4/15/2008
Beautiful yet again. One critique, though. In the third to last line, you used the word "past". I think you meant to use "passed". Also, if possible I think either "passed" or "pass" in the last line need to be changed to something else. The word is a little redundant. Speaking of which...I've yet to find a substitute for "swing" in one of my own poems...
Unknown Sorrow chapter 3 . 4/15/2008
Isn't that the one thing that keeps people alive sometimes. They live for that one person in their lives that they can't live without. I know the feeling...
Unknown Sorrow chapter 2 . 4/15/2008
Blame those who remained silent... I'm sure those who knew blame themselves once it's too late... Another beautiful poem.
Unknown Sorrow chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
Nice. Yes, when one needs it most, everyone is deaf to your cries for help; never okay...
A Distant Planet chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
I really like this poem, one of my friends committed suicide last year, and I didn't even know he was depressed. I wish I could have done something, but either way, I really do love this story. I hope that you post the other two poems you have, I really like this one.
xxsosuemexx chapter 2 . 10/16/2007
Aw... that's so good! So pretty... Big smiley faces are coming your way! ]