Reviews for Dove
white rainbow chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Wonderful expressions! 'to tell the world I died for love' I like the line 'paper heart beats no more'. Although it's sorrowful, it has a sense of peace in it, which makes this piece beautiful. Nice work.
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
oh my god the first stanza.

this is really beautiful.
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 9/23/2007
different then what I normally read. You write amazing by taking such a simple thing. Nice work
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
This poem uses a lot of beautiful images. I love the peaceful mood you have, especially the part about dancing as the rain falls through you. Short but sweet.
ZombieMcQueen chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
I love the imagery, especially of the dove. nicely done.
Edit This chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
Sweet, but doves stand for faith/religiousness.