Reviews for Willow Tree
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Very clever! As 'Matthew James Current' says, you can definitely feel a mourning in this piece. Very well done. Keep writing! You are very good! :)

AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
Colonel Mustard 8 chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
I love this one! This is a beautiful peice of writing; very poetic. This is something I can read again and again and never get tired of. Good job, and keep up the good work.
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
Beautiful. I love the personification of the tree, though I also liked that you chose the weeping willow to watch over the grave.
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
Very nice piece here. What makes it stand out is adding winter into the poem. It adds a distinctive and softly-spoken element of sadness and mourning, balancing out the familiar imagery of the weeping willow with an original and fresh element.

The speaker's voice is very soft (or rather soft spoken) and if feels as though you have used a gentle brushing of words in this poem. Solid work.