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   ObliviousLady chapter 15 . 11/22/2007 Yates is very interesting... Good job with this chapter. I really enjoyed it. |
| lilswtmai chapter 16 . 11/21/2007 AH! I LOVE IT! I love this story more and more each time I read it! Honestly, this is one of my favorite stories and I find myself going back to Chapter 1 and re-reading it! Thats how interesting and how much i love this story! Lol Pathetic? Maybe, but I dont care P You'll have to kill me ) So Yates is starting to grow on me, yet I still dont really like him! I just dont think he's right for Elliot. And Jack, I know what he did was super messed up and he's an absolute DICKHEAD but for some reason I'm hoping he and Elliot will work it out and get back together! They just seem to fit each other more. So Yates is pissed off at Jack for something Jack did to a girl Yates knew.. Could it be that girl Jack got pregnant & made her get an abortion? Maybe she was Yates sister? Or close friend? Or something? Lol I almost kind of sort of not really feel sorry for Jack Haha I have my fingers crossed and am cheering for Jack regardless! ;) GREAT STORY. Please update ASAP! ) |
| Lochi chapter 12 . 11/21/2007 I'm curious about this Yates guy, good chapter, Jack must suffer haha |
| Lochi chapter 10 . 11/21/2007 Hell how could he be so cruel to her? At least he knows he fucked up but anyway, he's an ass and he should be treat like shit now lol |
| Lochi chapter 8 . 11/21/2007 I hope they're going to be together again and soon )) Liked the chapter ) |
| cherry617 chapter 16 . 11/20/2007 This is my new favorite story! I love it. hope they get back together soon. |
| SuperCUTEJensen chapter 16 . 11/20/2007 wow they kissed...cant wait for more! |
| euphorictragedy chapter 16 . 11/20/2007 Yeah, she should feel guilty. I know what it's like to be snubbed by a guy and wanting revenge but that's so juvenile. Just let it go and move on. Staying upset is just a waste of time. Don't worry, I still really like this story. |
| SummerBaby94 chapter 16 . 11/20/2007 well... jack does deserve this but... not in such a cruel way... it's making themselves just as bad as him... now though i want to know who jack hurt so bad that caused this huge fight between jack and yates. |
| Aqua Revolver chapter 16 . 11/20/2007 HA! Shame Jack... that's all I have to say... HAHAHAHAH! |
| Lochi chapter 6 . 11/20/2007 Ouch I feel sorry for Jack, good chapter! |
| Lochi chapter 5 . 11/20/2007 Leo found them? lol |
| Lochi chapter 4 . 11/20/2007 sweet. He's gentleman that he doesn't push her to do anything more, I'm curious lol but good story! |
| Inkhearts and Inkstains chapter 15 . 11/20/2007 I love your story, I can't wait to see how the plan goes! PLease write soon. |
| SuperCUTEJensen chapter 15 . 11/19/2007 Great chapter...I'm not sure about Yates, I dont know why...I think he likes Elliot...I'm glad that Jack's jealous over them..now he has to do is win her back .cant wait to see what happens next |