|Reviews for One Over The Other|
| euphorictragedy chapter 15 . 11/19/2007
I don't trust this Yates dude. Something is up with him. And why would she stoop so low just to piss off Jack when he apologized and seemed genuniely sorry for what he did. I hope he wins in the end.
| lilswtmai chapter 15 . 11/19/2007
Great story once again. I'm assuming Yates actually likes
Elliot, why else would he be trying to hard and showing
so much affection when no one is around? Too bad Elliot
just doesnt realize it & goes back to Jack.. then again
Jack is an asshole who needs to be taught a lesson, Sheesh!
Please update ASAP! I wanna know what happens next! )
| SummerBaby94 chapter 15 . 11/19/2007
hah, the whole "i don't see why else he would do it" wow... just wow. that is truly dense. but that's what makes elliot a cool character.
| SummerBaby94 chapter 14 . 11/14/2007
hahaha. jack gets jealous so easy! i wonder if he actually like elliot... yates is still kinda sketchy to me. it seems like he's doing this to hurt jack and that's just cruel.
| lilswtmai chapter 14 . 11/13/2007
LOVE IT! I bet Yates likes Elliot huh? Or he will.
I cant wait to see what happens between Jack & Elliot
Please update soon!
| SuperCUTEJensen chapter 14 . 11/13/2007
That was a great post..I'm rooting for Yates...keep him like this!he seems nice to her..Is Yates going to fall in love with Elliot? cant wait for the next chapter...
| lilswtmai chapter 13 . 11/12/2007
Great story! I absolutely love it. Honestly, you're a
great writer so keep up the good work! I hope you update
soon because I'm dying to know what happens next! Its
kinda sad/dumb how Brooke slept w/ Elliots ex boyfriend
yet when Jack walks in on Elliot & Mitch, Brooke throws
a fit! Especially since Elliot & Mitch didnt do anything
PLUS Brooke SLEPT w/ Elliots ex boyfriend so what gives
her the right to be mad at Elliot when SHE slept w/ her
best friends ex? Girls can be so vicious and such
hypocrites! Either way, I LOVE the story so please update! )
| SexyCinderella chapter 13 . 11/12/2007
Great update, girl! I like Yates, I like him very much. And Im starting to dislked Jack more and more. Hes an ass, a controlling ass.
I supposed that Yates is going to be the "boyfriend stage" in this 'lets-make-Jacks-life-hell little plan? That would be great! Hes hot, nice, with this 'bad boy' aura... Plus, Jack hates him, right? I wondered what went there.
| SummerBaby94 chapter 13 . 11/11/2007
ahh maybe jack will get off his pedestal now and realize he's not perfect, and elliot didn't do anything with mitch. i hope so!
| SuperCUTEJensen chapter 12 . 11/10/2007
I like the plan... more drama...it sounds like fun...
| Aqua Revolver chapter 12 . 11/9/2007
That was a good plan! I must say
| SummerBaby94 chapter 12 . 11/9/2007
i'm actually kind of excited to see if jack is really hurt by this... i know that sounds horrible but right now, i think he needs to know how bad he hurt her. on the other hand though, he doesn't really know that he's hurting her by not talking to her, because he thinks she's with mitch.
| ObliviousLady chapter 12 . 11/9/2007
Wow, new twist that I was not expecting at all...
I love it. More drama and scandals... it sounds like fun!
| lilswtmai chapter 12 . 11/9/2007
YAY! you updated! Lol Great story, I'm curious as to what
happens next & if Elliot's plan w/ Yates actually falls
through & is successful! Please update soon! )
| lilswtmai chapter 11 . 11/7/2007
Hey! Again, great story so please update soon!
I think I prefer Jack, even though he was a
total ass.. I dont think Mitch really suits
Elliot. He's kind of boring, more like a
brother to Elliot. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! )
You're a great writer & I love the story line